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Post by Sunstream on May 22, 2011 17:23:55 GMT -5
OK yes this is a RP check by Your Med. cat! There are very short rules, and are posted below. - Your post must be 5-15 sentences long
- Your post must include proper grammar
- Your post should include some strong vocabulary
Below is how you will be graded there can be a top of 100 points 20 will go for your vocabulary 10 will go for punctuation 5 for spelling 15 will go for sentence structure 40 will go for effort 10 will go for following posting rules _________________What you will be Rping_________________ Kits-Moss balls Apprentices-Reinforcing camp Warriors-Hunting Elders-You may Skip the role-playing check Staff-You will RP about what you do best ____________________________________________________ |
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Post by Shadowkit on Jun 12, 2011 23:39:31 GMT -5
Shadowkit layed alone in the nursery for all the other kits had scampered off outside. She stared at a rouge moss ball that the kits had left behind. It was a strange small moss ball, in an awkward shape. She batted at it side to side, between her paws. "Hmm... Shadowkit's name should be Shadowlight yes little moss ball? Shadowkit thinks so, ~maho!"
Shadowkit focused on the little moss ball and gave it a mouth. "Your name should most certainly be Shadowlight~ Kero," the little moss ball said. Crazy... I must be going crazy.... Shadowkit smashed it and leeped away from the creep. "NEVER! My mentor or leader will choose my name!" She stuck her tounge out at it and curled up in her mother's nest. "Yes... My mentor. I can't wait to be an apprentice!"
Shadowkit clawed at her nest, kneeding the moss back and forth between her tiny claws. "Maybe I should've gone to play with the others ~maho." She stared at the entrance then jumped up and raced outside. "Shadowkit wants to play too~ Maho! Wait up!"
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Post by Sunstream on Jul 4, 2011 6:03:43 GMT -5
I give you a 99
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Post by Lightkit on Jul 25, 2011 18:03:17 GMT -5
As Lightkit slept beside his dear mother, Wolfhowl, he felt something bump into his nose. Blinking sleep from his eyes, he slowly crept out of the warm nest and stretched. 'I wonder...' he thought. He began to paw at the moss ball, then he hooked it with his little index(?) claw and tossed it towards the entrance to the Nursery. Lightkit waited. Then the moss ball came hurling back to him. 'I thought so. There must be another kit just outside.' he thought as he caught the moss ball in his mouth. As he was about to throw it back, Shadowkit entered the Nursery. "So you were the one tossing the moss ball!" he mewed. "Would you like to go play outside?"
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Post by Sunstream on Jul 26, 2011 20:19:04 GMT -5
98 is your score
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